Our Monster: Mr. Four Eyes
Our Hoover Partners' Drawing of Our Monster:
Our Description of Our Monster:
Mr. Four Arms has black horns on the top of his head that curve inward. He has black pointy eyes. He also has yellow hair that sticks up but it doesn't grow around the horns. He has a blue coat that doesn't fit very well, with four black buttons and four black buttonholes. He has four arms with four purple fingers at the end of each arm. He has two major body cuts that are stitched up. One goes from his left toe, up to and over his right eye, and then back down to his right knee. The other goes from his right toe up to his coat, and then up to his left shoulder. He has yellow toenails that stick out of his black toes. He wears yellow and green striped pants, has purple skin with green designs, and has big teeth with blood on the tips. From the tips of his toes to the top of his hair he is 8 and one-half inches tall.
Reflection on Our Progress:
Our partners did a pretty good job over all, but what they did the best was the coat. The other thing they did well was the body shape. They might have missed the part where we said, "He had four arms."
We probably could improve our description where we said he had green designs on his skin. We could have said, "He had one design and it was on his chest." We also could have described the design, eyes, and head. We completely forgot to tell about the orange stripe on his pants, and we could have described the legs and pants better.